This week, I'll be recording the three songs on our demo: Danger, Homesick, and Belief. Yeah, all our songs could be one-word titles. We pretty much finished Danger last Thursday, and Homesick is just me singing, so that should be done tomorrow, provided I'm not called in to sub again. That leaves Belief. This song is the brain-child of Kyle, and it's in 3/4 time which is cool, but I can't seem to put the right melody on it. I've written something, and it sounds okay, but it doesn't sound right like the other two. It's all major-key, and the verse has a funky number of bars in it. I don't know. I'll record the melody I have now, and if anything else comes to mind, I'll keep trying to replace it.
Songwriting has been really difficult for me. For the most part it goes like this: someone writes a guitar riff, Ray lays the bass line on it (he is incredibly talented and can do that with just about any song), Dan puts a beat to it (or Kyle sometimes if it's his song), then I write a melody and lyrics on all that. The hard part for me is the melody. I try to imagine what the melody would sound like if I heard the song on the radio, then as soon as I hear it, I try to sing it again and again until I remember it. Once I remember it, I'll try to write words for it. The lyrics aspect of songwriting is also difficult, but usually all I need is an idea, and then the story just builds from that. For instance, on Homesick, I heard the chorus melody pretty early on, and it sounded to me like a wistful, nostalgic song, so I decided I would write about someone being homesick. The chorus is
The sun is moving around
But there's no warmth to be found
There are smiles all around
And it's pleasant
But it's not home
I feel left out in the cold
It's lonely here on the road (2nd chorus: Knowing I can't return to our home)
The verses couldn't be just about being homesick because that's too simple. I needed some depth, so Meg helped me out. The first verse was explaining how this person being in a strange town is reminded of his own home town, the similarities and memories. Goes like this:
Driving through this town
It makes me think of the sound
Waves crash on the shore
Seagulls calling for more
There's kids playing with sand
Plastic buckets in their hand
Clouds go passing by
Like white memories that can fly
The second verse was describing how this same person being back in his home town is still homesick, because the thing that made him homesick, an old flame, doesn't live there anymore, and you realize that this person had a serious relationship that ended and he or she can never go home again.
Walking through our home town
I notice you're not around
Traces of your face
In an old familiar place
Lights float on the rain
Nothing new and nothing changed
All these empty days
Our home has faded away
That's it! Now, it took a while to get all the lyrics down, then once I had them written down, I had to memorize them (which I didn't for the first show we played this song.) The very first two songs I wrote with Faulkner Alley were about a couple as well, but in different ways; one was an angrier song so the lyrics told the tale of a guy whose girl cheated on him with another girl, the other song was about a person who works up the nerve to ask someone out, then works up the nerve to ask that same someone on the first date to have sex. Not the most deep or original songs, but Belief and Danger were better subject matter and better lyrics, I think. Only time and effort will tell, but if you wanna check out our demo songs, I should have them up on MySpace, Facebook, and ReverbNation soon (hopefully this week!)
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